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This seems like a no-brainer to me. If it's in the character's a nature to swear every other sentence, then let him swear. Anyone will swear in the right circumstance. ...

But I think North Korea would be a very similar situation to Afghanistan. Terrain, yes. In all else, no. The people we are fighting in Afghanistan are not the Afghan ...

First of all, Ouch. That hurts to read. That being said, there are a few problems with your concept. North Korea launches an attack on South Korea. The U.S., South ...

Most injuries can be fatal if left unattended. Many broken bones and internal bleeding need surgery to heal. Falling creates both of you could go with either. Internal bleeding is ...

Answer these questions for yourself--it's your character, no? Furthermore, any answer to any of these questions will be realistic, to someone. It all depends on what kind of guy you ...

Instead of trying to describe the explosion itself, think of the things that happen when a bomb explodes. Describe, using your five senses, what the characters in the vicinity feel, ...

50 or so typed pages, plus another couple notebooks full of snippets and ideas. Still not completed. Utter writer's block. -.-

Give us an example of the fight scene you're working on at the moment--We'll have more to work with, then.

YWS? Should be obvious, no?

A Microscope is a microscope, yes? For future reference...please use a proper subject line? If everyone said "OMG PLZ HELP" when they wanted help, no one would be able to ...

What makes writing a villain so different from a hero? I think defining that might be a good first step.

I have the same problem. I hear (well...read, really, since it's their LJ entries) all these people talking about how they can hear their characters in their heads and have ...

Indeed. Just mix it around, add and subtract sentences. Feel comfortable posting it here? I'm sure people wouldn't mind helping you out.

I'd write the screenplay, or at least co-write it. That way, nothing is lost. I would also produce the movie. Along with Peter Jackson. And Jerry Bruckheimer. But yes, I ...

In addition to Writersdomain... Body language--how your character moves can definitely convey a personality. How they walk, stand, do ANYTHING, really, can be critical to setting a personality.