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Falling leaves were scattered all over the muddy wet floor. Great starting line. I find it to be a big passive, though, and therefore uninteresting. I'd make it more aggressive, ...

Ego, What gives you the right to personaly insult anuther member? The fact that I'm a 24 year old member of this site who happens to like video games. Read ...

I've seen people who are in their 20's on this site. I'm sure there are some of those who are unemployed who just waste time all day playing video games ...

Eamon “Well,” Eamon said after a moment. “That was certainly...int’resting.” He crossed one leg over the other and adjusted his beret, which had been knocked askew in the flurry of ...

This is little more than a fragment. There's little-to-no plot and very little character development. I like the direction it's headed, or rather, where it came from, but as of ...

Let's take a look at some hard numbers. Using: Only 92,107 of their total of 689,475 (13% of their posts) are in the literary forums. They have 12,607 threads in ...

You are staring at a blank page of paper- I think this would read better as "you're staring at a blank sheet of paper." Page implies part of the book, ...

[quote]YWS has the lowest number of reviews on the web.[quote] That's quite a claim. Do you have any sort of evidence? Are you talking about total reviews, or reviews per ...

I didn't say that. even a simple 'like/dislike' is helpful in numbers You DID say that. The point is that there is no quantity now Actually, the point is that ...

On this forum Quality is very good, But quantity is sorely lacking. The fact that you would rather see 10 "OMG LYKE SOOOO GOOD" reviews than one well thought out, ...

Hi, Merlin. 1. This answer is heavily dependent on the type of helicopter you end up using, and its nation of origin. Helicopters with two crew members (pilot and gunner) ...

"I'd torture him till he squealed like a pig. Give him a taste of his own medicine. ...Oh. Portrayal? Hell, I don't know. Do I look like a writer to ...

Did you know there's a forum on YWS called "Will Review for Food?" It's a place you can go to request reviews for your work. If you don't feel the ...

He sifted through the maps and papers littering Marlon Grey’s desk, trying to get a feel for the man. He’d given up pursuit of his quarry in favor of greener ...

The Black Market is literally just a place where things are sold after-market, meaning either they've been bought or stolen, then resold. The closest comparison to the black market that ...