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Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Does 'being born' count?...No? I guess I'd like to have a prettier smile. Like that one movie star, you know the one." --Hunter, Emergence Which is better, and why; the ...
Mar 16, 2012 -
Re: YWS Screencaps
Lookit Raz's title.
May 13, 2011 -
Re: One Shot. Calling All Critiques!!!!!
...I think you missed the point entirely. 1) I'm not attacking you. I'm saying your piece needs work, because you aren't working with characters, but archetypes. You have a very ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: One Shot. Calling All Critiques!!!!!
Before I even start: Your thread titles makes me want to set you on fire. It's obnoxious. The piece itself is interesting, if two dimensional. Battered woman kills the man ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Ghosts That Linger
Hello, socks. Gunslinger . . . Guns linger . . . Guns are ghosts, lingering with me... Not a fan of the repetition of "linger." It's too fancy a word ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: March Hare, November Wolf (1)
I always seemed to have a tune stuck in my head these days. Dun like this. We don't even know anything about the character yet and you're already spoon-feeding us ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: I resent this forum's name. However...[OPEN]
Voodoo, I hate you for requesting that. Emphatically. And yet, I will review it. All three of you; give me a week or so, and all will be done.
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: And the Light Fades (chapter 1 part 1)
I talked to you about my thoughts on this piece in chat, so I will simply rehash what I said so you have it for future reference. --Great patience in ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: I resent this forum's name. However...[OPEN]
Done , cC.
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Stains of Red
Hey cC; Disclaimer: Everything in this review is opinion. While I won't always say "In my opinion,." it should always be implied unless explicitly stated otherwise. I don't presume to ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Welcoming Richard (TSoaC except)
Hi Lauren; Disclaimer: Everything in this review is opinion. While I won't always say "In my opinion,." it should always be implied unless explicitly stated otherwise. I don't presume to ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"I have to say books--no really, I have to--but Kindle is the future. Paper's days are numbered." --Hunter. Emergence. Favorite book? Favorite passage from said book?
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Many good writers seem to get ignored
Interesting, indeed! ...Makes you wonder if I was being facetious, doesn't it. ;)
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Many good writers seem to get ignored
First off, I didn't say all 20 year olds were losers who were unemployed and stayed at home playing video games. So that isn't a generalization. It's only a generalization ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Best, or nicest? If the former, gotta be Damon getting me 'involved.' If it's the latter...I dunno--my Mom bought be a Nintendo 64 once." --Hunter, Emergence What's the most cliche ...
Apr 19, 2011
