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Right off the bat--double space your paragraphs. I like your dialog. The initial exchange between Tricken and the Clothes-maker is very amusing. It has an almost Greek wit to it. ...

Purely for clarification's sake: Silver finish, no? Automags FTW. And Edit: I stand corrected, by the way--The gun you mentioned could indeed be referred to as a Magnum, though you'd ...

The psychological element is very interesting to me--I dig those stories that revolve around the character and his own demons, rather than flinging bullets at thugs. I think you said ...

Glitch in the system from last night--Nate is currently working on it.

Confirming some stuff in Saint's Crit... Should magnum be capitalised? I dunno if it's a proper noun or not. Or you could just save yourself the trouble and say "pistol." ...

And what kind of gun, precisely, is a "Magnum?" Magnum is not a kind of gun. It is actually a modification made to ammunition, to which weapons are then chambered. ...

Kylan--actually, the way she has the gun described it is a revolver, and probably a big Smith and Wesson, which usually have a silver finish. In short...if it has a ...

Day 1. 6:05pm. Kevin. I stared into her eyes, meeting her gaze evenly. "You wanted shit to get done, Jo." I looked away and leaned back onto the bed, massaging ...

No worries :)

Please note, that if you rewind time AT ALL in your post, that it MUST keep the continuity of what has already been established. For example, in Dynamo's latest he ...

If your hammers have guns duct taped to them, perhaps. ^.^

Day 1. 5:55pm. Kevin. I unloaded the cartridges one by one, dropping them onto the sheets in covering my legs, then set the empty magazines aside. "Be a doll and ...

Seraph Had this been a different time, a different place, the looks upon their faces might have been laughable. The instant that gryphon–it had survived, apparently–collided with my demons, though

Everyone congratulate Areida on being the Queen of the Young Writers Society! Huzzah! ...And ME , as the King of YWS.

Triple Posts FTW Firearms List for Necropolis Written as such: Name of Firearm (clickable to picture of gun)--Caliber of firearm, any attachments. Kevin's guns: -- customized Ruger Mini 14 Ranch ...