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Okay guys, here I need some help; character development is not my strong suite, so I need you to point out ANYTHING you feel is too over the top, strange, ...

Must every conversation turn to religion Bobo? Anyway, a couple things to say about Qi's post... What you said about everyone being a pyschopath or sociopath is not quite correct...everyone ...

I hate to give anything away, but pretty much everything asnyone says or does in this book has significance. Surprisingly, I like many religious things into the book later on, ...

nothing? not even a titter?

An hour later, Yurok slipped into the orc encampment, undetected. He completely ignored the orcs sleeping by the fire, as well as those guarding the command tent. He headed straight ...

No, I think he was saying that black people dress "like that," which, in its own right, is discrimination. (More a stereotype, but oh well) And Bobo, best to keep ...

:oops: thanks a lot!!

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Wow, Qi, that is possilby the coolest thing I've ever heard! (the last part opf your statement) I love it! I myself fall into the Agnostic part of Qi's statement ...

hmmm...*thinks hard* L****** was fun, but S****** and I get along really the point where we're finishing each other's jokes lol

rolling on the floor LAUGHING MY....eh...FACE OFF! So true, so true, Bobo.... but hey, we ended up with the greatest history teacher on the planet, did we not?

be my guest, Z. I'm no leader

I'll send you a copy to fiddle around with, Bobo

Tess: I do the black inks by hand, the colors by compy using a program Bobo gave me, photostudio 6. (I find photosdhop is both tedius and unwieldy for me ...

In my opinion, I think you should do a little expanding and describing of characters, that was the reader has a mental pic of them before you send them on ...