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Re: I Was There
Hello, Meg. As requested. Disclaimer: Everything in this review is opinion. While I won't always say "In my opinion,." it should always be implied unless explicitely stated otherwise. I don't ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: The Gold Watch (chapter 1)
Hello, 322. As requested. Disclaimer: Everything in this review is opinion. While I won't always say "In my opinion,." it should always be implied unless explicitely stated otherwise. I don't ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: World War III Help
But I think North Korea would be a very similar situation to Afghanistan. Terrain, yes. In all else, no. The people we are fighting in Afghanistan are not the Afghan ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: I resent this forum's name. However...[OPEN]
Genres I Consider Myself an Expert on: Action/Adventure SciFi Fantasy Character Art (not so great with photography or abstract) Genres within those genres that are my favorite to read: Serious ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: A Character
Hullo Kamas. --Maria needs a shadow on her face, indicating the depth of her face within the hood. --Face is very good. Expressive eyes and mouth looks great. --Hair needs ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts
Hello, Summer. Or when your all alone in a world that holds billions? When your all curled up in your on misery? Twice a painful mistake. You're = you are. ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: World War III Help
First of all, Ouch. That hurts to read. That being said, there are a few problems with your concept. North Korea launches an attack on South Korea. The U.S., South ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Need Help
Most injuries can be fatal if left unattended. Many broken bones and internal bleeding need surgery to heal. Falling creates both of you could go with either. Internal bleeding is ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: hello everyone!
Hello, Anne. Buscador! (! obligatory) here. First off...welcome, obviously. You got it right in posting here, as this is a place for us to welcome you (like so.) Heavily Simplified ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: The Borneo Bushmen Pt. 1
Hi pen. Almost the first half of the story is an info-dump, unfortunately. You toss lots of little bits of information that are relevant, but jumbled together in an only ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Z-1412 Discussion Thread
I'm implementing a rule-change, as of now... Don't pass any long length of time without talking to me first. For example, over night. By making a night pass, we've suddenly ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Z-1412 Discussion Thread
Broadcasts made by undergound radio groups aren't exactly credible. Let that little miscommunication be a lesson as to why, in general, it's a good idea to communicate using the Discussion ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Z-1412 (Accepting characters, please read carefully)
When the young woman paused in front of the store, I had a feeling she'd do something stupid. When she took her first step toward the soldiers, I made my ...
Nov 12, 2010 -
Re: Z-1412 (Accepting characters, please read carefully)
They came into view just as I slung my pack onto my shoulder after stepping out of the abandoned store. The men with assault rifles were bad men. They had ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Back-ish.
Nov 8, 2010
