Eferhilda

Thank you for the review. I did follow a "How to" guide when I wrote this to get the format and such right. I see what you mean by attention//intentions. ...

Yeah, but they aren't that bad. I have read far worst.

Really enjoyed this! There is a lot of passion and emotion poured into this and I can feel it with every word. Which, the word choice was done very well ...

That is also my favorite part! Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the review. :)

Thanks! I will be sure to look into trying different punctuation and such :)

Glad that you could relate to it and that you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the review :) I dug this out of an old collection I have and after I posted it and read it over noticed the grammar errors that you ...