Ebil2

Great story, just let me point out some errors The wind whipped at my hair like an angry beast, whispering dark secrets into my ears. The street was empty; the ...

You have great story going on here, only problem your grammar and sentence construction. Eg. Two years ago the father of Joe and Sara passed away with little notice, and ...

I quote my father: “Michael Jackson has become a legend.” And we all know legends never die. ~ Kara That is so true, he was a legend. Good Job!

Ok, I just started this new story, (its a fantasy). The problem is I cant think of a name for my main character. Has anyone ever had this problem, what ...

Great Story, only thing was that you seemed to be using She alot in the beginning. ex: She also happened to be extraordinarily bright. She astounded her tutors everyday with ...

Hey, Ebil! I'm assuming this is similar to the Character Answer Game . If you have something different in mind for this game, let us know here; if not, please ...

Great beginning, this certainly has alot of potential. The only thing I had a problem with was that it all seemed to rushed for me. But I am sure since ...

Okay here's how it goes: Your character (You can choose whomever) has just had something slipped into his/her/it's drink. Because of this they are turned into an animal (any animal ...

----->: NO CAPS! WE HATE CAPS!!! WE HATE THEM!!! Even if you HATE something so badly, please do not use caps. Thanks, Im not a fan of people rant with ...

----->: NO CAPS! WE HATE CAPS!!! WE HATE THEM!!! Even if you HATE something so badly, please do not use caps. Thanks, Im not a fan of people rant with ...

Hey Names' Ebil, and Like the title suggest, im new. A little about me: favourite genre has to be Fantasy, (Thats whats I write all my stories about) 2. I ...