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Re: Are You Ready?
I figure you don't have a lot of time to rewrite a story so i'll give you my quick opinion. "Fuchs" almost looks like you're trying to say a "bad ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: In the Wake Before the Dawn
To begin, pretty much everything after the "opening" was beautiful. I liked the dialogue and thought it was very meaningful. It really was pretty cool. The opening is only 90 ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Stars, pt. 1
I found it hard to get make it through the opening put it looks like there are some good parts lying within the story. I would really recommend redoing the ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Immortal
I sincerely believe that is something that you could publish if you add some more to it. It was written in a way that very easy to read (a good ...
May 9, 2009