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I think this is an interesting and passive beggining. I personally like that, but a little more depth added to this first chapter would not be bad. Keep going.

^ Is wrong about me checking my spelling < Should be studying v Is waiting for vacations to write the whole day

2) Sometimes kill when you want to kill them. Let's face it, sometimes they just need to die because you hate them LOL! So true, I find myself wanting to ...

It's great that you have this goal... I don't know much about how to but I'll tell you what I usually do to keep everything at hand: -I make profiles ...

Now that I think about it ever heard Kanye West's "Stronger".... I think that may be the motive, to develop the character and make him stronger or reach a breaking ...

I prefer to make the reader start thinking to his/herself, "Hey, who are the good guys and who are the bad? I can't tell anymore!" Because that's how it usually ...

Sounds like an antagonist to me. Brown hair and eyes, not that handsome or ugly but pretty tall. Oliver Filaminov.

Tall, slim, dark eyes and black hair. Unpopular between boys but smart woman. Ivan Fleming.

Well, now that I think about it... I have a cruel character. I love him just like the rest of my characters. I'm guessing he's just cold and dry like ...

Makes me think about a mischief boy, short hair and messy work area and about my French mate. Dante Kovalev.

I usually don't push it and leave the story alone for a while. Someone once told me writer's block lead to good ideas once they're over.

If there are two things the reader remembers with certain exactness there are the first and the last chapter. Haha, I began writing my story before I had an ending, ...

I agree with Amelia... I personally like to tell fear with suspense and desperation. Not just the *boo&scream* effect.

* "As a scientist, Throckmorton knew that if he were ever to break wind in the sound chamber he would never hear the end of it." * "Just beyond the ...

A creativity test... Not a creative person though I may give it a try: What the hell? Time for changing my water? I don't mind clean water but I can't ...