DylanRay

Thanks for your comment!!!Yes,now that you mention,I think I did some mistakes.About that 'fill',I did think I wrote it wrongly.Thanks for your help anyway!Oh,I wrote this song for my mum ...

I like nocels that involve magic and wizrds or somehting like that.But the point is,You describe the place and the time very well,But if you can think of something creative,something ...

I like the character,Macey.U qrote the novel very well.Good

Hmm...Not bad...I surely did pay attention!

Good like it At ur age u write well

Good

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Good,like it

I was afraid of the darkness and my head is fill will fearful thoughts But suddenly,you came right up to me You look at me You're smiling at me You ...