DylanRay

When I saw your prologue, I thought~Whao~It's so long~ I think that this novel you are writing might be very long. Right? By the way, I agree with Freeze,it's awesome! ...

BAbe~ Thank you for your advise~~~!I did change a little bit of my novel. And I admit that my grammar is not good . The verb and past tense thing, ...

Hope you guys like it! Thanks for posting your comment~!!! Step~~!!!I re write it again~~~!!! Please read it and give me your advice~~!!! ~~~Dylan

1 Mile Jason Torres The Birds are flying freely in the Sky. The Dolphins are swimming happily in the Ocean. Jason has always dreamt that if he can be one ...

Hey there~ I like this story!I can see that you're a fan of Percy Jackson~! And i saw a Narnia one just now. Hehe~ So funny~~~ Trent Aether and the ...

Whoa~! Wait Kaka... Is it that in the end 'miss?!' die...? I can't really figure out the story, i guess maybe it's because I am nt at your age or ...

I agree with them too.I think that your opening is kinda strange...Sorry if we offended you.But I like your story lines!It is quite an interesting story. So, do you have ...

Hey I love this movie! And the book! I brought this book and read it! It is so good! Tumbs up!I also brought its second book-Committed:A sceptic makes peace with ...

Step,thank you for your comment~ Yes, I think I am confuse about the past tense and the present tense when writing these novel. But I really can't explain the character ...

Please leave a comment~!I want your advise please~!!!This is my first novel and I don't know if it's good or bad!First time! Please!And if there are people who want me ...

Chapter 1 Jason Torres Sky.Bird.Ocean.Dolphine. Jason has always dreamt that if he can be one of them, isn’t it great? Be the sky, it feels so good to feel the ...

Whoa~I think this seems like an adventure novel more than a romantic novel!Is they going to be a second part and chapter 2? Like the roses~Keep on writing~Good job~

Is there going to be another chapter?Because I only saw 1 post on your portfolio.BTW,I want to ask why can't i post my novel?I am writing 2 but I can't ...

Is they another chapter?I think this is one good story you had write when you are small.Not bad.I kinda like it.8-10?yeah,we are like small creative authors when we are young.But ...

Hey!Good writing skills!!!I can't wait to see the next chapter.Yup,it minght be a little bit too short.But I like what you are writing.Good job!!!Keep it up!!!(Pls write the next chapter!!!)