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Re: Visions (Chapter 1)
I am sorry if it is too short. I wrote it in a rush and post it quickly. I haven't even write the plot and all that yet! I will ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Visions (Chapter 1)
Chapter 1 Emily Gray-The 'Nerd' January 16, 2011 Melanie High School 8:30 Can’t wait until recess. Summer is over and now school had been reopening for a week. Time does ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 1)
Thank you Azila~~!!! I don't really know what to say,but i always thank people for their advise!So again,thank you!!!Hehe~~~Yeah,I almost forgot that you are going to review my novel,cause it ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Midnight
Hey Azila~~~I really like what you have written! You use such good words!!!I am soooo jealous of you~~~!!!HEhe~~~!!!I like the imaginary thing you had written. I had also wanted to ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Requiem
" * Report this post * Reply with quote Re: Requiem Postby Master_Yoda on Thu Jun 11, 2009 4:42 pm Hey Kara, Firstly, don't worry about the fifty additional points ...
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Re: The Penrose Stairs
Overall, I really liked this piece. I was intrigued when I saw the title, and after I started reading I was sucked in right up until the end... maybe even ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 3)
Okay now everyone~~~This is the 3rd chapter of On The Road~ Feel free to give comments and advise~~~!!! Cause I really need them~~~Hehe~~~ ~~~Love, Dylan
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 3)
3 Miles Jenny Torres “Hey mum.” Jenny picked up the phone. The person who called Jenny was her mum. “Okay, I am coming. Bye mum.” Jenny said and hung up. ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 1)
Hey Meep~~~Thank you for your advise~~~ I changed the follow already. I really love you all guys for giving me advises~~~Thank you Meep~~~ By the way, can I know who ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 2)
Hey Step~~~ I rewrote it again~~~ I made a few changes but if you want to know you'll have to find them yourself~~~ Thank you very much~~~ Here's something I ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 2)
Hey Step~! How have you been too? It is a long time since you online(I think so). I really like you very much. You seems to be very pro in ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 2)
Hi everyone~Okay, now this is my 2nd chapter. I think there's not gonna be a problem because I had already read it 3 times and re wrote it.(At least that's ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 2)
2 Miles Jenny Miller Being a bird, the feeling of freedom of soaring high up in the sky with its powerful pair of wings that’s what Jason wanted most. He ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Introduction to Super Duper + 1st Chapter
Baywolf~ Sorry, I can't give you advise cause I am not good at this. But I can give you compliments~~~! Haha~ I think what you had written is quite interesting ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: The Lost hero
What book is this? Never seen it before. I only saw the Percy Jackson series at the book shop that day. And also lots and lots of Harry Potter series...
Dec 5, 2010
