DylanMichaelis4

You did a very good job using details from the time and Taoism details. I also liked how you didn't just tell us what happened you described it in detail ...

I really liked the ending of your story and the action in the book. I wonder if you could have checked your grammar a little bit more and your spelling. ...

Hello Isaiah, I really liked how your story was full of Taoism facts and details and how your character has to do with the actual event of Taoism spreading. Although ...