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DwahnePipe

  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Mansion chapter 1

    For me the use of 'as' in the first paragraph is too much and maybe you should try and use separate sentences or find another way. Also the word 'blindingly' ...

    Sep 12, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Missing Mother

    Like last time, something is wrong but i've read it so many bloody times i cant think anymore. I think its the pace but i don't know. Would be great ...

    Sep 11, 2008
  • NovMo Re: Suggested Word Count!

    Just puts into perspective how slowly i write because i generally get about 250 words done a day.

    Sep 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Working Title

    I was thinking this could be the start of my new novel. What do you guys think? I do write quite slowly which is why there isn't much of it ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Book ideas: Having so much trouble thinking up one!!!

    The thing is if your writing a story and then another story takes your interest then what's it going to be like for the reader? Surely if you, the writer ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • Homework Help Re: World War I Literature

    If your taking about poetry then a few poets are: Wilfred Owen Siegfried Sassoon Richard Aldington Edward Thomas Isaac Rosenberg Edmund Blunden These poets are covered in the book 'Six ...

    Sep 6, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: New Member

    Thanks for the advice jasmine. What music do I like? I'm not too picky, like listening to The Killers, The Enemy, Kings of Leon, Feeder, Dirt Pretty Things, The Charlatans, ...

    Sep 6, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: New Member

    Hey welcome to YWS. I'm from the UK too, just started the same year and everything. What A levels are you taking? I think this year is much nicer because ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: New Member

    DwahnePipe - Hey, welcome to the YWS family!! I hope you are most welcomed here. :D So about your very basic outline of life... *what do you like writing? Poetry? ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: New Member

    Hi I'm a new member. Like everyone else I enjoy writing. I live in the UK (Suffolk at the moment) but I come from Nottingham and that is where all ...

    Sep 5, 2008


The only distinction that makes one a hero is constantly fighting back your villain arc.
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