DustyFreeman

Wow. Haha, I am sorry. But I actually laughed throughout this whole thing. I think it is pretty amusing, so please don't take it the wrong way. Not down to ...

Okay okay. This is pretty good. I just think that you need to fix your lines a little bit more. You know, work out the words a little. For Instance, ...

Simple word, Amazing. I love how this poem already is. And the swiftness of it makes it appear to stop abruptly, I like that. I actually think that adding to ...

Correct. :D TPBM wants to eat something, right now!

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Hey! I love this. It sort of reminds me of Romeo and Juliet! I think the line "So did the feud Between our families." Did that for me! I really ...

I like this a lot! Pretty good, just a few capitalization errors as most have said. But I really do like it. Congrats on the 'comfot zone' leaving. :) It ...

A simple note; Dignity, fate, hope. I feel your love Written in every quote. Darling, check the mail Open thy sealing; What I give won't fail, It comes with a ...

This is amazing! I'm not one t give criticism, but none is needed here. I was a little confused with the rhyme scheme of things, but you gave me a ...

I really like this poem. But it sounds more of a type of . . . 'school poem.' What I mean by that, is it seems like an assignment you ...

He felt a wet drop fall to his hand, He shouldn't be crying for he is a man, He saw an angel of this he was sure, I see her ...

I will be fine as long as you need me; Fighting against the ones who deceived me, My brightest star flashing across the eye Dost thou wander the streets alone? ...

Hi! I'm Dustin, call me what you wish. I am fifteen, I love sports and poetry. I enjoy writing, and talking, so go ahead and message me! :D I have ...