DustyFreeman

You have quite the obscure opinion. But, every one is entitled to one! Science is quite an interesting subject, I like the one you use the 'rant' type of styling! ...

Pure beauty. I love the way you explain everything, using it to connect. That's the whole point! It's pretty strange at how you use your words. But I like it! ...

I absolutely love this! You have no idea. The flow, the concept the creativity. You're amazing! Almost like my ex girlfriend, but a tad smarter, and more brave to use ...

In the cement, We etched our lives; Both with our hands, And the years of her life. Yet, as time came to past, We said all of our goodbyes; The ...

I met this woman, She had beauty beyond compare; My hands start to wander, My eyes begin to stare. This is a secret, Yet this is sweet; Our shadows hidden, ...

One new word, commas!!!! Beneath me thou enemies shall become Makes no sense whatsoever. So, all this really needs is a few punctuation fixations I do enjoy it, great subject. ...

I love this theme. (I have been saying that a lot lately) It's great! I am in total agreement to the comment above me. This seems to be a little ...

I do like this concept, or to show the more cornier side of me, I 'love' this poem :D For a first time, very good job. I think you should ...

Very great! I love the theme and how you laid it all out! Perhaps splitting it in half, and creating two stanzas would help the Judgment. Just one thing that ...

That day, When I told you how stupid you were, and I said that you needed to grow up, and move on I didn't really mean it. I was foolish, ...

Wow... Good use of onomatopoeia's! But, hmm, this rhyme scheme, or just the overall type of poem is so confusing! You have thing jumping all around. Like: Heartless and lacking ...

Wow! Amazing! I think this magazine will love this article! Just a few typos here and there. I have noticed that all friends have made up their own little 'gang', ...

Wow! Amazing! I think this magazine will love this article! Just a few typos here and there. I have noticed that all friends have made up their own little 'gang', ...

You will have to forgive me, but I am an error and typo freak. So there are a few of those here and there. Other than that, I think this ...

Hello. Not too bad! I do enjoy the theme, and I do agree that its something very hard. But, it may be just me, but the rhyming seems forced throughout ...