DustyFreeman

This is one of the most amazing works I've ever read. I personally love guitars, the way you used the guitar's player view on the surrounded, and switch it over ...

I love this so much! It seems as if you're a map, plotting the coordinates of love! :] To me, this poem shows a change in life, it shows that ...

Driving miles down a desert road Let all your emotion show Tell me what ever was special about us If only I could change your mind. With this deep Limerance, ...

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AMAZING! SUCH A TALENT! Just a few typos great job Now, I cannot possibly hope to compete with these other wonderful reviews, but I do hope that this helped. I ...

Parliamo di amore Every night and day Parliamo di amore in every single way. Noi respiriamo in aria to live, to see noi respiriamo in aria to dream, to be. ...

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Huh? is this part of a play, because none of the story is explained or maybe i'm just confused *looks confused* yep, that might be it My same feeling. I ...

Hi, Shini. I have to say I loved this poem. I didn't find any grammatical errors (I hope I didn't miss any; I'd feel bad.) I thought the rhyme scheme ...

You're a broken streetlight, I can see it in your eyes. Just crawling for a new life, Your face shows the lies. Believe in me, Look at my soul Let ...

This is pretty awesome!!!! I love this one too! You just keep gettting better. One thing I noticed is that I'm quite like Jayson at times. Getting into the oddest ...

I like this a lot. But I was just a bit confused about the beast. Who is he? What is he?> Why is he there? What is he doing? How ...

Thank you everyone! I think I jsut have that problem of rhyming. I love to rhyme, but I also cant. The scheme of it all. Just like an evil plan ...

Whoa! Rhyming and more rhyming! I personally love to use rhyming in my poetry, and eeven in a few stories, so knowing all of this is awesome! :]