Durriedog

Hey Twit! I was drawn here by the name of your novel. It's intriguing ^^ This is a very well-thought-out and interesting story, to me. The characters seem well-developed and ...

Hey Disturbed! I'm going to review this by giving my thoughts and corrections through your story. For starters, I would name this pretty quick because most people of YWS dislike ...

Hey Tom! Your post caught my eye for some reason. Keep in mind that although I've never reviewed a Script before, I've written and read several before. Also recognise that ...

First impression: Is it still loading? - How does it look in your browser? It looks great but for some reason unfinished. Maybe some more colour? - Is it easily ...

Can I first just say, that this is really sweet and I was drawn here because of the title... The Killers, *SQUEE!* But onto the review. I was listening to ...

This is a very touching story. I bet you're mum is proud of your gifts as a writer. And I'm not just being nice because this is non-fiction. My nitpicks ...

Hey, this is great!! Very imaginative, I love this new twist on vampires. But, what's with all the underlined words and little one-liner thoughts? both are annoying, and as far ...

This is a really good story and I applaude you for it! However, your writing style is quite anti-social; you don't tell us what the character is feeling, and it's ...

I like it! Really, it's very good and you have some real skill for writing modern-day battle scenes, and medieval ones as well I presume! However, you have a problem ...

It's interesting, but it's mainly telling and not showing. At the start it is pretty confusing, and at the end too with the 'telling the kids' part. But good! Your ...

This is really just holding the place for a real review, okay? I don't have enough time for the rest of it now but I'll get onto it!! I wrote ...

Hey well done again! I have a few nitpicks, though; 1. The story didn't really seem to end. You leave us sitting there with an 'And your point is?' air ...

This is the first part of a short-ish story I am writing. Please tell me if I should consider continuing this and finishing it. Thanks a lot :) NOTE: The ...

Well, I agree with lena on... nearly everything. It was really I cool piece, I'm liking it! But a brother dog wouldn't be able to recognise his sister. My aunt ...

Sarahhhh! I stalked you down! Wow, you are really good! I loved how you repeated the 'sliding, joining... dripping'. It is by far my favourite line! Also, I liked the ...