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Re: Chapter 1: Cafeinnated Dreams
Love it. Coffee in different time settings. Great buildup too- from the cafe to how he met his wife.Brilliant
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: Mars One: One small error of man, one giant failure for mankind - Chapter 1.1
Hi, Its a good start showing different settings. However, pay attention to the tense. This can be done by checking the 'does' ,'do' and 'did' that should match the tense ...
Sep 23, 2014
