DukeofWonderland

Hey desire, you're from South Africa or you like just live there? I guess this should be on your wall not review. Sorry, I'm jst a little too lazy:P There ...

Yes, I like poems they're so much better to read. And yes I actually finished reading one of mikepyro's. Maybe they should do this review day more often I have ...

Is that a women a is singular and 1 person is being spoken of so replace it by woman. Maybe it was just a typing mistake. Well, I like the ...

When I sat back down he was scowling at the screen. Yup, I couldn't continue reading from there onwards. Your writing is very smooth and clear. the grammar and writing ...

Alex gasped. “Abi that isn’t it at all-” “Have you got everything packed?” Jasmine cut across them in a stern tone, abruptly ending the conversation. Okay so I lost it ...

Well I haven't read your story but the cover is intriguing. Job well done!:)

It seemed quite deep and maybe too deep for me to understand though. But I think I got the real essence. Swinging from a tree, can you see her mischievous ...

I LOVE your writing style; perfect flow, and pace. Even though I still don't know what War of the Swans is here, I can bet it's going to be a ...

That was a surprisingly short poem. the silence that makes a goldfish bowl around you My chatter is a paper aeroplane that hits the glass and falls away it’s a ...

That was very cute and sort of funny too. Well usually. The last para was scary. And I really liked the contrast in these two paras: We are monsters chaos ...

Your poem was very intricately described and that was very amazing. The physical feelings were so nicely written I can actually feel it and you know what I know exactly ...

She stood there by the grave suddenly looking like a helpless young girl as she broke down to tears. No one had any words of consolation for her, what do ...

Wow you got a lot of reviews! I want to feel your silence.Get lost in your worldof absence;where everything feels more distantthan it really is.Where laughter knows no soundand screams ...

hYBRID leather studded humans & stuff of dreams both sound a little weird here and don't seem to go along very well. The rhyming was good, smooth.

I am a contradictionwith long golden braids & pristine baby doll dresses matched by my tattered knee caps and bruised fingertips. Ithink the description provided in this para made the ...