DukeofWonderland

Quicker.Quicker.Candlelight Flicker.Tap.Tap.Footprint slap.Huff.Puff.Cough,cough, stumble!Spectacles tumble!Tummy rumbles. I think there should be a coma after each of the Quickers at the top. and Tap

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[[[This has a few quotations from other songs by 3 days grace and Simple plan, hope that isn't a problem.}}} Earphones on, he nods along That toad-like voice just found ...

Dear Christie, I’m sorry I never got to be there for you, but I hope you understand why. Meeting you has - well, it would be a dream come true ...

‘So, you’ll be graduating this year. What are your plans for college?’ A common question - one I’ve been asked so many times, in so many ways I don’t know ...

So I read Harry Potter and admire Longbottom So I still watch Zack & Cody, and other Disney shows So I like Adrian Monk’s weird character role And I still ...

Words take me happens all the time Words take me makes out the crime The 2nd statement makes words take me a noun, 1st one doesn't make sense as a ...

Great picture, looks very interesting, I'm going to want to read a book like that, oh yes.:) But I guess just a positive review doesn't help a lot so I'll ...

Why are you an anteater? Well you can't quite edit a lot in lyrics, it's music. Very violent wording, ow...maybe too many expletives, but asa I already said- it's music. ...

All is lost,But losing is nothing.When nothing is left,That could ever be lost. Nice one:) Because all is gone,And behind us is destruction.Created from by sounds more proper in this ...

Cute avatar:) Laying on my soft settling bed, you could omit this word, flows better without it relaxing every bone in my body. Nothing springs to mind about/ What am ...

He’s sociable to both genders, even to those having two genders- you know what I mean? Yes, I laughed at that. At some times when my father and I are ...

There was adragon and a stripper and a man on the stripper and a shot and they moved away but who died? The dragon? So I didn't get your poem. ...

Guess what? I've just been thinking the same thing for days now, I guess since I joined this site. I actually packed up all my writings, evey thing I 've ...