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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Forgive

    Forgive Is this the title? …….Forgive the ground: unfertile, dry. we usually say Infertile land, make infertile, dry’ the next line. …………………we are irrelevent just the same. irrelev

    Sep 9, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Serpent's Teeth [1]

    Lord, you write huge stuff! I’m not an avid reader or expert writer, I’ll simply say what I feel. Hope you’re fine with that. piano sounding sour, feels a bit ...

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Freedom

    I'm sick of this life That this maze of pain and sadness I want to get out I don't belong to this world I broke the chains that binds me ...

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: White lines

    Started out little , smoking weed 'til it's dry I feel that punctuation was missing here later needing something different, something else to try So let me introduce myself , ...

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Only Hope

    your sweet poison infects my blood stream, from this line create a new paragraph and like wise do so every time u change the rhyming pattern. The song..or was it ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Alone, but alive

    Happy birthday, I am quite right twenty This felt redundant- the qiute right part having been cursed for this latter decade to share what do u mean by a date ...

    Sep 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Purity Lost

    The rain trickled down on her perfectly done, auburn hair. Rain droplets joined the tears on her makeup-caked rosy cheeks. Well, I’m not an avid reader, maybe that’s y- but ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: One with Serenity

    Sunlight peeks through the clouds and dances on the tips of blades, green and rich as moss in a swamp. I see u’re breaking sentences, it gives this sort of ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Fate I Never Chose

    Since when are u a poet? Oh and an epic one too! (I'm being my toughest critic- don't mind.) You actually have good imagery, it’s like describing in a story ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Music and memory

    ##The portions in italics are from 'If I die young' by I think 'The Band Perry' or sth similar. This song is being heard## If I die young, bury me ...

    Sep 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Heavenly Dark

    Sometimes black,And sometimes white. But always in time This sounds more appropriate To make it right. You twist shatter flows in better my heartInto a million pieces,And catch my breathUntil ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Facing reality

    Waking up we brush our teeth and start complaining about everything we wish we had and never got and everything we have but can’t appreciate. It’s sad but true, like ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The Nobody I’m Proud Of Being

    I sometimes feel sick and tired of seeing my friends take on the road with courage and determination, A* diploma%u2019s in their clutches, on the way to glory, when%u2026I%u2019m left ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Moment of Truth

    AWWW, thank you. I know you can relate, this is for other students to relate to.

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Moment of Truth

    Sweaty palms, shivering arms, goosebumps: all that's felt Stomach trying to knot itself, lungs trying to collapse, The little, vital object: the heart has given up it's aim- 'Beat no ...

    Aug 16, 2011


A day without sunshine is like, you know, night.
— Steve Martin