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Re: Legion
Ancient in days, spawned ere the dawn of man I think it's were, right? Princes of hell, these sons of none Abominations Still walking this realm, Lucifer’s first and last ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: College Life.
Somewhere in somewhere-land, the word seems weird at first read- maybe this’ll help lives a ponderous beach that I stumbled to cross on by.- the grammar and structure here is ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: A howler from Mars
hehehehahaha- I think my livers hurting, can't possibly be- no that's my kidney hurting. So yes you can see it was epicly hillarious and that's not very common in YWS ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Little Bird
I used to have friends, but now they are gone. Too direct And from all the money I had, now I have none. Same issue here I look at you, ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Why death if we all fight for life?
My name is Eileen Roberts. Two months ago I gave birth to a beautiful girl named Jordan. When I was 17 weeks pregnant, after a common ultrasound, the doctor told ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: So tired
This is my worst poem I've ever done. This is the worst poem I’ve ever done, or- this is my worst poem ever- grammatical errors I forfeit the concrete images ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Afraid of the dark
He woke up in the middle of the cold night on March 9 as if someone had just screamed in his ear. The description on this sentence was very long, ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: The Things I Carry
I look towards the map and decide on a destination; preference is extended towards the five boroughs and the Metropolitan Transit Authority- This statement suddenly seemed oddly stated, but after ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Music and disparity
###Portions in italics are lyrics from ‘Here without you’ by ‘Three days grace’ and usually, portions in inverted commas indicate a conversation of the character with herself.### ‘Slip knotâ
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Feathers in the wind
Well, it's a short poem that I didn't completely understand the concept of: Oh dear, imprudent fellow – You – why do you write like this? the portion seemed weird ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Strength
It sounds like it came from the movie my soul to take. The imagery was missing, rhyming went weell but you must have noiticed glitches ion ur grammmar, I also ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Music and fury
##The portions in italics are lyrics from: Love the way you lie and not afraid by Eminem- Also, portions in inverted commas are the character talking to herself### Black, Peppermint, ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Music and fury
Black, Peppermint, ballet-flats; white, couture, purse in hand; the black skinny jeans, the silver-grey tunic, all seem to match in- an odd puzzle still lasts. Walking down an empty alley, ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: games
The the game is solved. The the kings stack up like Sherwood venison, I play red, you, black, and we skim two of the humours across quadrants, planes, ……….the Chinooks ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Insecurity
I always thought you'd be My prince charming. somehow this doesn’t rhyme Now I see you took advantage of my insecurity You never really liked me. I see the emotion, ...
Sep 9, 2011
