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Re: Abstract Poem
The raindrop slowly runs down rain- run, gives a redundant feeling The broken glass. I'm not sure you should put a full stop here Shattered into pieces Lying on the ...
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Revel.
Jensen Acke ahwt? Now my Waht's even messed up. :( The incessant rumble of a slaughter house, I don feel the rumble sounding in here as the right term The ...
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Re: Gayfriend. :3
Yay! My gayfriend got featured :D
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Unrequited
I knew I was being stupid, very stupid actually. Hiding behind a curtain wouldn’t stop anything. But my soft velvet curtains, the pink and purple floral patterns, the warmth in ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Prologue
Chapter One Liam Hunt This is like Jodi Picoult- this is the name of the character of this stream of consciousness right ? Make portions before this bold If you ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: The Last Job - Short Story
Shane had been to the house once before, I i t was a few years ago when he was still a kid but he remembered it well. He knew the ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Homemade Devil
I love myself. I don't care about you. I'm very mean. So screw you. I like the beginnig- no, I love it :) I'm selfless. I'm wicked. You better stay ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Music and fury
51 Views- 1 comment- and all my friends read this- God! nehu, I love this piece of my work:D
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Gayfriend. :3
I don't get your smiley:D that's all I know to give :D It's strange how amazing a person can make you feel. Who you talking about? btw, he doesn't care:D ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Condense into Clouds
***Bold are from One Republic lyrics. Italics are thoughts*** Suddenly surprised at the clouds unity, spread into shreds but still portraying harmony The clouds reflect God’s notions, (or so he ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: The Well of Knowledge
Deeper than the ocean more solid than the earth K, this statement isn't as concrete as the first, the first comparison was perfect She was here before, brought forth in ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: With Love, From Albany
Yes, you’re the rope, too--I think that’s important; you’re the force keeping me tethered where you want me to be, and not where I need me to want. I don't ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: The Physics of Me
Objects in motion stay in motion unless acted upon by an external force. Most people learn a variation of this law in Physics class, but I learned it differently. Judging ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Hummingbird
Unceasing motion- An impossibly urgent heartbeat compares only to the frantic beats that defy gravity with swift movements. I am going to asssume this is a blank verse, good flow ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Do it for mum
“Charge!” A line of horses disappeared. Fear, immortality and then the sheer need for escape. The heartbeat, I could feel it, throbbing. The last portion seems a little off I ...
Sep 29, 2011
