DukeofWonderland

Eventually I found this and now, I shall be the last one to post here (probably). It's certainly been a great experience simply knowing that I'm not the only weirdo ...

Sorry for the notification bro- shall review soon.

Oh Sasha, I wish you were here now. I don't know, maybe you'd have been mad-mad at me but they would find out anyway and many already knew. I know, ...

Okay....I read this in school with my friends all staring. I swear they hate Chris. BUT nehu, back to your piece. Your writing style, like always is good. But I ...

Nice! :D

The golden light of the sun refracted through the window danced on the tiles, creating shadows of the various items in the corridor. “Finally, I’m alone. I can paint. I ...

Why did this never get featured? manush shob pagol. JAI hok, the grammar, flow, description, content, emotion, story plot, shob awesome silo- I still love this piece alot. You know ...

I have a no. of things to say: I didn't get the last para. Who's the guy in your avatar?- Just curious. 'the other tonight'- is sth else I don't ...

the epic-est part of this was that I understood, for once. Either my English sense has gotten better, or Lumi’s decided to spare the ppl with low reading IQ. Probably ...

Hope that helps. :)

A The I guess'd work better little girl stood in the enormous playground and looked at the school with utter amazement. Not only was she dazzled by the sheer size ...

Your writing style's like epic and du-uh you know that. And, you know, the story was like sad and stuff, but well, I'd go for a happy lie too, like ...

Look look at me and rejoice! hair is not brown and my skin is not white. how could it be? listen! in darkness, i was nothing, but then God said, ...

[ at the edge of a table ..... undecided a feather’s touch is enough; i will not breathe. It was once full, a warm embrace, moulded between my hands. This ...

The teacher said the list of names outloud,but mine was never mentioned twice. Here I felt a sudden lack of rhyming. But then after reading the next portion, it worked ...