Dugas

My fingers trace the elegant writing on the cover of Poisons and Antidotes: The Expert Guide . Books are underline/in italics. Short stories are in quotation marks. The knowledge that ...

This gave me a really warm feeling and I loved it. A great prologue, you wrote enough to make me feel attached to the characters so I would care whether ...

I think a little more structure could have done this a world of good. Instead of double spacing the entire thing maybe try something more like: I can’t see your ...

Very short, very sweet. My favorite line is the first, and it was an excellent way to start. Am I right in admiring the concept of spirit being much more ...

It's good that you don't habitually ride alligators. (Although, it might make an amusing children's tale.) 'Round here everyone is a bit eccentric; seems all writers are. When you'd like ...

I'm Dugas (silent "s"!) and I just joined. Erm, I don't really know what I'm supposed to put here, so I'm just going to fill up space I guess. I'll ...