DudeMcGuy

That's the first thing that I thought of too. haha

Sorry, my spellcheck failed before I posted that! Hope you can still make sense of most of it. Forgive my spelling errors! :)

Sorry, I also forgot to mention the part at the end with Danil and Arvad sort of "losing it." as you described. Good work there too as it reinforces that ...

Nope, but some people have read it that way. I'm not sure how that happened. I wasn't trying to be funny when I wrote it.

Ready or not, here comes part 3! {she same man then shouted to the others outside the door.} Typo alert! "she" should be "the". {much to the fear of observant ...

Hey TheSunChildren! Here I am with the review I promised. ***Disclaimer: I'm pretty new to YWS and creative writing in general, so please take this review with a grain of ...

I get what your saying twit. I sort of intentionally tried to make this prologue read like a passage from an old text/short story. The characters are going to be ...

Thanks for the help ShadowVyper! I don't consider it "nitpicking at all. Yeah "N.D." is supposed to be a time period like A.D. or B.C. I'm not sure if I'm ...