Dubaian

Firstly I suggest you read the rules on posting. Max of around seventeen hundred (1700) words per post and you will need a minimum of three reviews, as of November ...

Couple of errors and strangely worded sentences. like migrating bird Perhaps 'Birds' is the word you were looking for. Phenomena of this gargantuan proportions does Replace 'this' with 'such' and ...

A good post, quite a bit to read but I am glad I had the time :P. I could not spot any spelling or grammatical errors, but as I review ...

your life flashes before your eyes. That’s a lie. My memories consumed me. Contradiction, needs revision, either by changing her view on what happens when you die or by removing ...

My first review “So, can you at least tell me who is going to win the flag this year?” I think this needs to be explored, even just a quick ...