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DrunkOnWriting

  • General Fiction Novels Re: Has Ben, Never Was

    The sun was low in the sky, casting a gentle, tranquil glow over the world and creating the elongated shadows that, along with the light, characterized a summer evening. The ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The way to get girls

    This poem made me smile...how unfortunately true this is:) Just a few little nit picks: to her grace has no compare. should probably be "have" instead of "has without her, ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Writing with music?

    I've tried this several times and it always distracts me...even music without lyrics! I'm not sure how people actually write and listen simultaniously, but I like to play music beforehand ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Help!

    I agree, movies usually work best for this sort of thing...although love songs can be a short, sweet alternative:)

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Character Names

    I usually look for character names by meaning. Generally, I create my character and have a good sense of his/her personality, and then pick a name that fits (baby name ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hey everyone! I'm new too (shocker) and am happy to review your poetry if you'd like some feedback. Who wouldn't, right? Just leave me a post and I'll get to ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?

    "You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you." -Ray Bradbury Not really a solid writing tip, per say, but one of my favorite quotes:)

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Help with writer's block?

    I had this same problem! It took me a while to get over it, but here's how I did it: Distractions. Yupp, that's right. Every time I got stuck on ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey

    Hey! I'm new too..amazing, huh? I'm happy to review anyone's work if they want me to, just leave me a post. I'm a big fan of poetry, heads up ;) ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Gothic Poem

    Great imagery, I'm not a huge fan of this style but this poem was actually quite enjoyable. As it went on I could feel the growing emotional intensity. Lovely.

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Kitchen Dance

    Literally couldn't find one thing wrong with this. A beautiful, well written piece of work. It's very refreshing to read something like this...you've definitely made a lasting impression on me!

    Jul 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Dreaming: a sailor's image

    A beautiful poem, it really gives the reader a feeling of fantasy. Nice ryhme scheme, I really liked the gentle flow of your words:) Keep it up!

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Do You Know Me?

    Wow. This poem is powerful, gripping, and emotional...very personal but isn't the best poetry made that way? Keep it up, this one gave me chills :)

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Drive

    Beautiful! You really seem to have a talent for writing. The flow is excellent, and I love poems that can activate your senses this way!

    Jul 18, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Graceful Warrior

    I ran. Faster than I had ever gone before. Faster than I thought my weak legs could take me. I ran fast, ignoring the bruises and cuts that had come ...

    Jul 18, 2011


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