DrunkOnWriting

“Bridget?” Ariel’s voice was unsteady as she glanced nervously between the two of us. Well, three, I suppose, although when her eyes landed on Ana I thought she was going ...

just to help you out with this a little: I was trying to make this feel a bit hectic; when something shocking happens, good or bad, it usually takes a ...

This was a very inspiring piece, it makes ME feel powerful just reading it! warriors walk fearless but not heedless for I'm not perfect, but I'm not worthless Great lines, ...

Wow! Beautiful, powerful, and packed with real emotion...very well written! Just one thing to add: Why must their be so much fake? It seems as though this should be "there" ...

If I tried to pick a favorite part, I would end up pasting the entire thing into this review:) The sadistic smile of the summer sun beats down on my ...

The fresh floral aroma engulfed me as I stepped down a smooth stone path. The woods around enclosed this vernal oasis, drops of sun falling through and dappling the world ...

Beautiful, powerful lyrics, saturated with emotion. I really loved this! Grey clouds, move away now Clear skies, peace at mind No regrets, no forgets my favorite part :) It was ...

Wow. I absolutely LOVED this! It's beautifully tragic:) Feed me love. Spare the hate. Insanity is easy to fake. My favorite part. This was an extremely powerful poem, you are ...

Extremely powerful poem, well written and full of emotion! Just one thing bothered me about this. It seems as though there is just one stanza that isn't rhyming... Day by ...

The daring escape lasted all of about ten seconds. My feet nearly slipped out from under me as I screeched to a halt before the tall figure in front of ...

Pretty good poem, some awkward lines made it hard for the emotion to really grasp me, but overall a nice piece of work You may want to consider breaking up ...

Scattered rays of broken sunlight lay across the room, a stray shard piercing my vision. Simple and plain, with nothing but a bed, side table, and dresser, it was clear ...

Hello, I would love it if you could take a look at my novel:) Thanks so much!

A very well written first chapter! I love this style of writing and was intrigued by the storyline. The dialogue was natural and your descriptions were very nice. Just one ...

Absolutely delicious first paragraph! I loved how elogantly you were able to describe a lego city. My favorite part by far was the tentative first meeting. As horrible as this ...