Drownsinapuddle

Even when I did like your repition of "It is" and "Yet...", it got annoying. Also, in the second line, "Yet far, oh so far.", it seems wrong. Maybe it ...

Yes, I agree with Claudette. The rhyming was a bit off and didn't really need to be there. Sometimes, ((Learning from my English teacher bare with me XD)) rhyming doesn't ...