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Re: Could It Be...
I love this poem because I can deffinitely relate to it and I think others can as well. It was extremely well written and elegantly described to the reader how ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: The Fear of Climbing
Hello! I love the use of the different build up words in each stanza, it really gives the poem it's own signature! Also, I like that this poem is different ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Up to Me (Chapter 1)
I like the way you started the story with a good hook, that's what got me really interested. Then, it went down hill, starting with the main character's personality. If ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Mi Puerto Rico.
This was an amazing piece of writting! I felt like I was really there on the beaches of Puerto Rico and looking out at the tropical waters. Sounds like a ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: By the River, In the Park
Hi! Love the adjectives in this poem!! It's very well written and makes me really feel what the subject of the poem is feeling. Great Work :) DropsOfSummer
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Mind Games
Mind Games My mind plays games with me. It tells me one thing, And changes it before I can see. * These games are no fun for me. And after ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: My Messed Up Love Life
Like the story so far! It's very descriptive,and I like that fact that it could lead almost anyware! I'll be following along to read more :)
Aug 5, 2011
