DreamyMoon

Thanks for the support, i wrote that at about 11 o clock last night half asleep so its good to know it works :) :) xx

Fickle Promises; That's all you are, That's all you'll ever be. Lies and remorse; A fake display, A charade i now see. Greedy dishonesty; Stole my feelings, Stole what i ...

Ahh i like this poem It really captures alot And the structure is good, the way you keep the words "They laughed" I think really emphasizes the actions. =] Like ...

I think this is very god I like the way it captures the smaller things in life, all the little thihngs tht make up the bigger picture =] Its gooood ...

Thanks for the comments :) By the questioned lines never called her one the phone etc I guess yeah it could cause confusion By those lines i meant when a ...

Well i really like this :) I like the subject and the way it talks about the wishesm of the future. keep up the good work= ] xx