DreamyMoon

Yeah i really like this poem mainly because it has the word dream in Cos at the end of the day i think poetry is all about dreaming, its putting ...

Ahh i like this poem It really captures alot And the structure is good, the way you keep the words "They laughed" I think really emphasizes the actions. =] Like ...

Ahh i like this poem It really captures alot And the structure is good, the way you keep the words "They laughed" I think really emphasizes the actions. =] Like ...

I think this is very god I like the way it captures the smaller things in life, all the little thihngs tht make up the bigger picture =] Its gooood ...

I think this is very god I like the way it captures the smaller things in life, all the little thihngs tht make up the bigger picture =] Its gooood ...

Fickle Promises; That's all you are, That's all you'll ever be. Lies and remorse; A fake display, A charade i now see. Greedy dishonesty; Stole my feelings, Stole what i ...

Thanks for the comments :) By the questioned lines never called her one the phone etc I guess yeah it could cause confusion By those lines i meant when a ...

He never looked into her eyes, He never held her when she cried. He never grasped her hand real tight, When they walked alone at night. He never stopped and ...

Well i really like this :) I like the subject and the way it talks about the wishesm of the future. keep up the good work= ] xx

Basically the main characte a rich girl called Kiera(KeeKee) lives with her picture perfect parents in the country side who insit on her living the dream it girl life. She ...

My final lifeline, My only hope. If this doesn't work, How will i cope? I've tried to be strong now, I've wanted to fall. But now that im here, I'll ...

I think this poem really catches that feeling that is hard to describe when you fall for someone that hard. ''Twirled like a leaf in the breeze.'' I really like ...

Well personally i thought that was amazing I think the perspective you are putting on death as it not being a final end and instead a bringing perhaps of people ...