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Re: Love
Well I gotta say i really love this poem. You hear the title and think, oh yeah love, i've heard them all, Yet i like the way this poem concentrates ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: A common thing really
Thanks for the support, i wrote that at about 11 o clock last night half asleep so its good to know it works :) :) xx
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: The blind girls plea
Look at me she says with the wind in her hair Look at me she cries with all the strength she can spare. Look at me she thinks as he ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: A common thing really
If you knew you were the victim of my poetry, Would you really start to look at me? See past the past, through the threats, Would you let us both ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Mask of Sanity--Prologue
You know what :) I liked that It was short yet emotive and the language was nothing complex but thats why it was attention gripping and real. It leaves the ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Ive just read the host by stephanie meyer...
Now i'm reading nineteen minutes my jodi picoult. Its really compelling, a great read. Absolutely loved the host though it was sooooo good and really got me thinking about life ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: What Are YOU Reading?
Now i'm reading nineteen minutes my jodi picoult. Its really compelling, a great read. Absolutely loved the host though it was sooooo good and really got me thinking about life ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Prologue of my book ....
Prologue My fist grew tighter and tighter as the lonesome minutes ticked by, slowly, one by one. Where was he? A glance at my cell phone two minutes ago told ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: An Autumn Romance
It's been some time More than a while But i'm sure tonight So sure of it. I'm ready to take that chance It's in the autumn leaves Their colors bewitching ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
Wow is all i have to say tbh That was really really good, it kept me drawn in, and my mind totally picked up where breaking dawn had left off ...
Sep 28, 2008 -
Re: Chasing the Wind
Its really good, and totally catches my interest in liek the first line =] Is it about dreaming by anychance because thts the way i interperet it? Not gunna comment ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Reversed Meaning...
Oh how you stare, Oh how you care, Or at least you claim to. Oh how you break, Every promise you make, Or the ones you pretend to make. Oh ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: This Timely Parade
I think this is totally lovely, the dreamyness and lardy da ness of t is great. It's serious but lighthearted at the same time, i also like the way each ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: To...?
Wow This poem is really good, i'm not gunna bother about the punctuation etc in it tbh becsause im more concerned about the message, the image and the emotions you ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: Fickle Promises...
Fickle Promises; That's all you are, That's all you'll ever be. Lies and remorse; A fake display, A charade i now see. Greedy dishonesty; Stole my feelings, Stole what i ...
Sep 23, 2008
