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Re: Souviens-toi que tu vas Mourir (Part IIII)
Hey, sorry for taking so long. I scrolled down to read the part you've made changes to, which is Hamilton mourning Laurens's death. I like how it was going back ...
May 1, 2020 -
Re: How Do You Plead: 8.3
Hey, just realised that your chapters are covering two different timelines! I'm apologise for any ignorant comments made regarding the timelines. _/\_
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: How Do You Plead: 8.2
Just a few commas here and there before I move on to the next chapter, I'll mark this as a comment as I have no suggestion or opinion whatsoever. The ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Souviens-toi que tu vas Mourir (Part IIII)
hahahaha, you're so right. ;)
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Souviens-toi que tu vas Mourir (Part IIII)
I agree with your decision to keep the politics in. I can see why, it's an integral part to their life. I understand. You have done an amazing job with ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Mon Amour (Part I)
Oh, I like this edit. It was as you said, 'coy'. lol. This was more realistic; believable too, especially since they are two perfect strangers thrown together. I like how ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Mon Amour (Part I)
Oh, I'm always ready to read and review. It helps me to keep myself creatively motivated and proves as a good distraction from my studies. Also, I meant "patience".
Apr 21, 2020 -
Re: Mon Amour (Part I)
Hello there! Here, once again! I see that you've made Laurens open up about his past relationship in this edit. I think it's only fair since we had Hamilton do ...
Apr 21, 2020 -
Re: Mon Amour (Part I)
Super. :)
Apr 15, 2020 -
Re: The death of Dr. Joseph Warren- an excerpt; Part 1
Of course! :)
Apr 11, 2020 -
Re: Parasomnia
I waist not a second more, and slam the left side of the door shut. "waste" These two bicker like old married couple, can't live with each other can't live ...
Jan 23, 2020 -
Re: Creeping Tom
You are not! I%u2019m glad I%u2019m being helpful with my reviews. :)
Jan 10, 2020 -
Re: Trust me, not? (Part 5)
You are very welcome! Yes, the more you write, the more you figure out where you need to work harder. I have the habit of posting as soon as I ...
Nov 13, 2019 -
Re: House
I'm super glad you enjoyed the story. Thank for leaving a review. :D
Oct 27, 2019 -
Re: House
Thank you for the review. I agree and I'm sorry of the typos were annoying, I recently printed out the story to go through I found all the mistakes but ...
Oct 27, 2019
