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  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Souviens-toi que tu vas Mourir (Part IIII)

    Hey, sorry for taking so long. I scrolled down to read the part you've made changes to, which is Hamilton mourning Laurens's death. I like how it was going back ...

    Fri May 01, 2020 11:52 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 8.3

    Hey, just realised that your chapters are covering two different timelines! I'm apologise for any ignorant comments made regarding the timelines. _/\_

    Sun Apr 26, 2020 7:44 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 8.2

    Just a few commas here and there before I move on to the next chapter, I'll mark this as a comment as I have no suggestion or opinion whatsoever. The ...

    Sun Apr 26, 2020 6:31 pm
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Souviens-toi que tu vas Mourir (Part IIII)

    hahahaha, you're so right. ;)

    Sun Apr 26, 2020 4:21 pm
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Souviens-toi que tu vas Mourir (Part IIII)

    I agree with your decision to keep the politics in. I can see why, it's an integral part to their life. I understand. You have done an amazing job with ...

    Sun Apr 26, 2020 2:54 pm
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Mon Amour (Part I)

    Oh, I like this edit. It was as you said, 'coy'. lol. This was more realistic; believable too, especially since they are two perfect strangers thrown together. I like how ...

    Sun Apr 26, 2020 7:33 am
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Mon Amour (Part I)

    Oh, I'm always ready to read and review. It helps me to keep myself creatively motivated and proves as a good distraction from my studies. Also, I meant "patience".

    Tue Apr 21, 2020 8:29 pm
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Mon Amour (Part I)

    Hello there! Here, once again! I see that you've made Laurens open up about his past relationship in this edit. I think it's only fair since we had Hamilton do ...

    Tue Apr 21, 2020 7:17 pm
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Mon Amour (Part I)

    Super. :)

    Wed Apr 15, 2020 5:18 am
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: The death of Dr. Joseph Warren- an excerpt; Part 1

    Of course! :)

    Sat Apr 11, 2020 6:00 am
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Parasomnia

    I waist not a second more, and slam the left side of the door shut. "waste" These two bicker like old married couple, can't live with each other can't live ...

    Thu Jan 23, 2020 6:21 am
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Creeping Tom

    You are not! I%u2019m glad I%u2019m being helpful with my reviews. :)

    Fri Jan 10, 2020 2:57 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Trust me, not? (Part 5)

    You are very welcome! Yes, the more you write, the more you figure out where you need to work harder. I have the habit of posting as soon as I ...

    Wed Nov 13, 2019 7:59 am
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: House

    I'm super glad you enjoyed the story. Thank for leaving a review. :D

    Sun Oct 27, 2019 5:28 pm
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: House

    Thank you for the review. I agree and I'm sorry of the typos were annoying, I recently printed out the story to go through I found all the mistakes but ...

    Sun Oct 27, 2019 5:28 pm


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