Dreamy

Hello there! Dreamy here! You've got a good prologue over there. There was not too many informations. Definitely fast paced. He dragged me towards the police station. I had knocked ...

Hello there! First and foremost, welcome to YWS!!! :D And Dreamy here to review your short. It was intriguing. It is a cliched storyline, at least in science fictions. Clones ...

Hello there! Man,you're like the Aamir Khan of literature. :P You always have some sort of morale at the end of your stories, which is cool. ;) Speaking of the ...

Hello there! Dreamy here for a review. An intriguing piece of work. There were a bit lot of typos. Let me first get you through that. His orphanage was gonna ...

Hello there! Dreamy here to review. This was a very intriguing piece. I liked the imagination you have used in this. They were funny. What I didn't understand was this, ...

I like it! You are very good with Allison and Mary, man. You are simply flawless with those two characters. I like it a lot! Dreamy here, once again! >.> ...

Hello again! Dreamy here to review, again. Hope you are not getting tired of it. Well, let's get on. This chapter was confusing because it was a bit like fantasy ...

Ello! Dreamy here, again! I liked this chapter. It was good in a way. There weren't too many characters, I guess thats where your strength lies. You are good with ...

Hello there, Dreamy here to review your work. I thought it would be unfair to review random chapters. So let's start from 1 :P You've got a good voice. Congrats ...

xD Oh my God! I like it! Better than all of your works that I've read so far. The complaints of his cellphone where just like a naggy girlfriend :P ...

Hello there! Dreamy here to review. This is a very beautiful work I've read of yours. This was amazing in every possible way. Literary as well as the content of ...

Off course it did! :P Hi there! Dreamy here to review. I like your brain. >.> I see what happened to you. You lost it in the middle. You didn't ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS!!! :D And Dreamy here to review your awesome work. Yes, this was awesome. Almost perfect, maybe. :P Because there were too many typos which was ...

Hey Gaurav! Dreamy here to review. This was a good read. I liked it. And as for the faults, you are focusing too much, as a matter of fact "only" ...

Hello there. Dreamy here to review. This is an very interesting story. Neatly crafted. I read your first chapter and you've introduced too many characters in them. I mean, why ...