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Hi Blue, yes the barrier was momentarily "open" for her to get in using the stone because the doors were open. Your suggestion about her racing the clock by running ...

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Thank you for the review, I will be using the same description for upcoming chapters as well but may edit it for this chapter so it's not as spoilery. Though ...

I agree with you, I%u2019m trying to get from point A to point B quickly because Hades gave her such little time. I may have to revise that part later, ...

Thank you!

Thank you! You are right it%u2019s not meant to be a romance, so upon revision I will be cutting back on that aspect, but I feel in this chapter the ...

@BlueAfrica @AlyTheBookworm @Prachi @Thundahguy

Solid point, thank you.

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really good point about mentioning the sword for Plot Reasons

Sorry to get to your questions so late. I considered that too as I was creating that detail about the dead keeping their scars in the Underworld. The answer is ...

Thank you for the review. %u201CTremble%u201D is not the final title it%u2019s just the placeholder for now. I sort of have a loose idea of the plot in my mind ...

This is a really pretty poem. I love the colors, the stark contrast of brilliant red against "miserable" blue/grey shore. I love every line of this poem, I can't really ...

Hey Blue, my reply got jumbled on my phone, I was saying the plot in my mind doesn't really lead directly into a romantic relationship with Hades, like I mentioned ...

I%u2019m reallh planning on revising their whole relationship because the plot I have in my mind doesn%u2019t actually have a lot of romance so I assure you it%u2019s not really ...