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Hi Blue, thank you for coming back to comment. This chapter actually isn't on its own, it's the first half of the next one where she goes into the Wood ...

Thank you barefootrunner, I really appreciate the review. Thank you for the nits, I struggle with the repetition in my first drafts so I'm glad you caught those. The writing ...

Solid points, thank you

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Yeah, the chapter is clunky I pretty much wrote it in one or two sittings. Thank you! And yeah, "self-doubt" isn't the right word. More like paranoia or anxiety due ...

Hello Ethan, This is an intriguing piece, the words chosen carefully and deliberately. A poem that starts on a melancholy note but ends with something positive, which I really like. ...

Hi Radrook, I wasn't saying you copied that poem, and that wasn't my intent to even suggest that you did. It just reminded me of the poem is all. You ...

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Thanks for reading! I have answers to your last questions but I guess I%u2019ll leave it for you to read in next chapters.

Glad you liked it, and thank you for the nit!

Thank you, Elysian. Yes, this is actually just the ending of one half of the chapter. The next part of the chapter is posted in the next part.

Thank you for reading, PrincessInk Yeah, totally agree with you about the romance blossoming a little too quickly. With some distance from this part of the story, I've realized that ...

Elysian, thanks for reading! I agree with you that the romance is too much, I got carried away and should have outlined the story better. A lot of what happens ...

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