Dreamworx95

Thank you. :)

Joshuapaul, thank you for your time and suggestions. It's not that I haven't taken the critiques to heart. My family has been going through a difficult time and I haven't ...

pettybage , good to see you again. :) You raise some very interesting points that I would love to discuss. I'm going to keep my reply brief however so that ...

Master Yoda, This story is probably my most favorite thing I've ever done and I'm very proud of it, but your thoughts have humbled me and brought me back down ...

Hello again pettybage. Good suggestions about the lamps or sailboats. I know I don't need much research for detail in this story, as Will just spends most of the time ...

DSF6647, thank you for braving through this even after you saw the length. My intent was to capture the reader's attention in that first scene, so I'm glad that worked. ...

Thank you so much for the detailed critique, pettybage. To be honest, I wasn't expecting to get a review on this so soon. I appreciate the quick response on this ...

TenYo, thank you for the crit. I was a little worried about the character perspectives. Now I know I have to make them a little more distinctive. :) I probably ...

Thank you so much Yoda.

Hey thanks Zan. It's always good to hear from you.

Hah! I loved this. OCD to the max. I have a friend like that and it's hilarious to mess with her. Great job.

Chapter 3 Noora Baghdad, Iraq, 2003 Baba’s voice echoes off the walls as he does his morning prayers. I stand in front of the window, listening to him recite the ...

Thank you for the review.

Thanks guys for the reviews. I appreciate it. I know this is a long bit of reading, so thanks for sticking with me, and I really appreciate all the gold ...

Thanks to Meadow, Zan, Anna, Master Yoda, Carly and Dele for all the help and encouragement. Chapter 2 Dean (Baghdad, Iraq, 2003) Insomnia. I’ve just recently learned the word. It ...