Dreamworx95

No these are not the last chapters, I think there are 2 more

Thank you!

Thank you for enjoying!

Thanks for mentioning that. I don't think it was clear, but Hades doesn't think everyone deserves to stay in Tartarus forever. He doesn't think it's fair to send people there ...

Thank you for your critique! These are great nits on my choice of wording. I don't always get it right :/

Thank you for the nits!

Thank you for the tips! These are super helpful!

Thanks for pointing out the apostrophe at the end of "Zeus" - I never would have caught that!

Thanks for reading!

Yeah, for Amir, I realized it didn't make sense for him to join the Goddess of War. His mission will lead him to the Goddess of the Hunt instead.

Thank you! Yeah, the d key is really giving me some trouble

Thank you for the wonderful critiques! You're helping me get these chapters as polished as possible!

Thank you so much for the rewrites lemon! This really helps! I will post the next few chapters tonight for you!

thank you, lemonayyde! Good nits! Ahh, I'm having issues with the "D" key on my laptop, so I'm really glad you pointed out those typos!

Thank you! Persephone is Egyptian and Greek, she speaks Arabic, which is the language spoken in Egypt and she was taught by her father. Thank you for pointing out the ...