Dreamwalker

You have a very interesting voice, to say the least. The dialogue was rather believable. The characters were interesting. Your diction was rather impeccable. On a reviewing basis, this story ...

First off, the idea was great. I can see the passion you put forth with this piece and admire that greatly. Walker here, with that review I promised! So, I'm ...

There was some definite imagery here, Kagi, and I do love imagery! So give you a thumbs up on that. Walker here, with a review, as requested, and might I ...

Generally, there were some interesting aspects to your style of writing and the character you give. But, as this is an unfortunate but, I'm not all the sure about the ...

Hey there, Smylin! Walker here with a review, as requested! And I'm glad there is a bit of length to this piece, now! Its seems less rushed, in that sense, ...

There is so much good I can say about this first chapter that it actually boggles my mind. First off, your characters are on point. They are flawed. They are ...

Hello Servant! Walker here with a review as requested. And I know its pretty late. I've been a little over-stuffed with reviews as of late so I hope you don't ...

Hey there! Walker here, as requested! Since I've been stalling a little bit over the past while, I think I'll just get to the nitty-gritty of this instead of beating ...

And I'm back, as requested of course! I'm always much more prudent when reminded of chapter updates ;D so I thank you for that! Now, lets start off with a ...

Hey there, Smylin! Walker here with a review as requested! Now first off, I'd like to point out that I really did enjoy this first chapter. It was emotional, heartfelt, ...

I get what you were trying to put across with this piece. The brutal truth is sometimes the only way to shock people back to reality. And the fact is, ...

Hey there, Loller! So I know this is ridiculously late, as per everything I do, so I hope you don't mind me reviewing this now! The contest is not due ...

Hello Keitaron! Dreamwalker here with a review, as requested! Alright so, because this is generally late, I'm not going to beat around the bush. Lets get to the nitty-gritty right ...

Hello there! Walker here, with a review. I hope you don't mind!This is a very lovely Villanelle! I actually quite enjoyed this piece simply because it has structure ^_^ And ...

I am not really going to go much into the aspect or structure of this poem simply because you were very emotional when you wrote it, and I'm sure you ...