Dreamwalker

Is this dying already, guys? Cause if so I'm going to be horribly depressed D:

Good idea :)

Brady: The Imp was gone. I turned my eyes towards Emma, the feeling in my stomach dissipating to a small purr from the aftermath. My limbs felt leaden and my ...

Hey there DismantleRepair (I like the name! Very Anberlin of you ;D)! I'm The.Dreamwalker though most people just call me Dream or Walker, and I'm here to review you piece ...

She sits with an idle brain,

Son of the moon That red sky tonight, means the moon is on fire

Because this is more of a retelling of events that have happened to you in your dreams, I can't really give it the 'Plot, Setting, Character, Grammar and Punctuation review. ...

here I am,

Can I still join? This looks like a lot of fun xD

Hello there! So I'm going to do a really quick review for this piece because its rather small. That being said, I'm going to skip my four usual categories, replacing ...

Well hello there Renn! My name is The.Dreamwalker but most people just call me Dream or Walker. You can call me whatever you find plausible. I'm here to review this ...

This would be a good time to jump in, Incog xD

Brady My stomach turned, abruptly. "Emma," I murmured, teeth chattering. "We have to stop him..." "He's an imp," she sighed. "And he could hurt you." "But he doesn't need to ...

At the same time, though, the world is such a big, wide place to a child. When you write, you should think of what a child sees. They don't just ...

Should I write in first or second person? D: Brady: Another Darkling. How interesting. I followed behind Emma, my eyes flashing towards the interesting creature before us. He didn't seem ...