Dreamwalker

You get a bag of buttered popcorn jellybellys! Yep, the nastiest flavour imaginable! *inserts rose-tinted glasses*

TL G-Wooster's is complete! Anymore requests? :)

Hey there! Dream here with a review, as requested! So, since this piece is pretty big, I'll give it my five sectioned review ;D. It consists of; Grammar and Punctuation, ...

Okay, the one for Echoes is done. Now TL G-Wooster, I'm onto yours next :)

Banned for being no quack. Squeaking is wayyy less fun!

You got the glasses and brown eyes right ;D Not the long hair nor is it brown! Hmmm, definitly glasses. Pale. Skinny and short. Chesnut hair. Pointy, pixie-like nose. Freckles. ...

9/10 artsy ;D a little weird though!

Does Santa where a red suit?

You get a 'I have no idea what a septim is' card *inserts 'Team Lumi' button*

Granted, you would'nt get new stuff (wowwww dead?) I wish that my cup of tea was never empty

Is the easter bunny real?

Okay, so as I read a couple of the responses, I thought maybe it was a bad idea to reply, but religion is something that has always really... bugged me. ...

All all honesty, when I read this, I didn't take it as a poem. Because the form is pretty much just spacing your sentences out in a way that doesn't ...

Dream here, as requested! Okay so I got really excited when I started reading this piece because it has form which is awesome! I love form ;D. Okay, now on ...

Hey there BookCutie! So, one thing I will definitely get at before I start this little critique thing is how very short this poem is! I know when I write ...