Dreamwalker

Hey Noir! It's Walkeh, here with a review as requested ;D. This is a bit longer so I can give you the full 'Dreamwalker' review! That being said, I break ...

About the whole two middle stanzas rhymning... well, I thought it would be interesting structure. I'm starting to second guess that thought process. Well, rip apart please and by rip ...

Jonah : Tick. Tick. Tick. Tick. The comforting sound of his watch flicking its long hands in that repetitive motion was always a soothing factor. Something solid. Something unchanging. They ...

Brady : Initially, I wasn't quite sure if I wanted to be here anymore. Titus knocked his shoes off easily before striding in to the nearest couch whereas he placed ...

Rosey's review is done :)

Alright, Dreamy here as requested! *cough*and even if I wasn't I'd still be*cough* ;D Okay, so I'm pretty sure you know my basic reviewing formula so won't really need to ...

Emma is sick, though, because Brady is sick. That was why Emma was the most frail in the first place. I could see the Oblivion or whatever we shall be ...

The colouring is awful, I know. Specifically because I did it on MSPaint with a mouse. I tried though xP Hopefully you like it! And if you hate it... tell ...

Simple. You get your opinion across, and I give you a thumbs up on that, but what I will say is that this is very short and simple. You have ...

Pretty much sheer godliness. I love how freebased this poem is, though usually I don't care so much for non-rhymning, unbalanced poems. In this case, though, your descriptions and use ...

I Can’t Write By: The.Dreamwalker Tap. Tap. Tap. I’m trying. Tap. Tap. Tap. I’m failing. Tap. Tap. Tap. Can't do this. The clicking of the keyboard. Immeasurable silence. Click, click, ...

And complete! Anything else, anyone? ;D

Alright, I can see the changes you've made and I definitely give you a thumbs up for the better. Okay, so, because I already quoted it up originally, I'm just ...

I like that idea. Originally, I had suspected the hatred between Darklings and Imps would be enough to start the drama that we needed, but unfortunately there isn't a lot ...

I'm going to have to say MeanMrMustard. A pretty cool kid if I do say so myself!