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Re: Stardust
The blunt honesty in poetry can often be a double-edged sword. Having poetry without really strong imagery or diction can be seen as childish, juvenile, and some may consider it ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Another Claim [Started] [Invite Only]
William : I had one and only one superior and that was Lady Popplewell. As I sorted out the manner of her quarters for the next bit, I couldn't help ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Report a good member!
I'll have to start off with Lava , because she's just so dang awesome ;D carbonCore for being my favourite wallflower/amazingly awesome jmod and reviewer Rosey , because she completes ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Another Claim [Started] [Invite Only]
William : Well this had been a bit of a surprise. And yet, not really. More like a general acknowledgment of what I had not previously known. At the same ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The Romanov
You have a very interesting voice, to say the least. The dialogue was rather believable. The characters were interesting. Your diction was rather impeccable. On a reviewing basis, this story ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Out there
First off, the idea was great. I can see the passion you put forth with this piece and admire that greatly. Walker here, with that review I promised! So, I'm ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Angel.
There was some definite imagery here, Kagi, and I do love imagery! So give you a thumbs up on that. Walker here, with a review, as requested, and might I ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: ~No Title... Yet~ Chapter 1
Generally, there were some interesting aspects to your style of writing and the character you give. But, as this is an unfortunate but, I'm not all the sure about the ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The First Son - Chapter 2
Hey there, Smylin! Walker here with a review, as requested! And I'm glad there is a bit of length to this piece, now! Its seems less rushed, in that sense, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: All the Perfect Colors (1)
There is so much good I can say about this first chapter that it actually boggles my mind. First off, your characters are on point. They are flawed. They are ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Remembering Emily
Hello Servant! Walker here with a review as requested. And I know its pretty late. I've been a little over-stuffed with reviews as of late so I hope you don't ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Light
This is glorious, Jenn! Like really brilliant! There are some very lovely techniques in here that really do astound me greatly. For that, I congratulate you! Firstly, though, I would ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Jesse Owens
This is generally a well executed piece of art, Tr3x! I give you so much props for that. I specifically like the interesting angle of the shot, and it was ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
The problem with internet 8 still appears to be there. I tried Firefox, though, and the problem, as you stated, does not include it. So I'll probably stick with this ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Hey Nate! So I'm really very sorry to be back again cause I know you're very busy with everything, but the original problem I had reported before seems to have ...
Jun 25, 2011
