Dreamwalker

Could you change my character to a Fire please? Who are you referring to?

This would be him! Name: Liam Rivera Age: 20 Gender: male Fundamental Class: Water Appearance: This is him! He's pretty laid back, style wise. He likes loose shirts with wide ...

Is there still room to claim a spot? If so, I'll claim whatever's left!

Alright so you have what appears to be a very nice structure. The beginning of something interesting. The first step. Everyone and everything needs that step first and foremost so ...

Prologue: It’s raining. Death is cold. It's listless and it's frightening. It’s the inevitable cause of all things we fear. All things we cant control. Its our only ending, our ...

I've definitely been writing in first person :/. Sorry, guys. Bad habit. William : "I don't like him," He lied. Poppy looked at him, smirking all the while. "Oh, William, ...

First off, I'd like to say that I admire the courage of this poem. Its outright as you clearly what to get the emotion across and for the most part, ...

Alright, this piece is interesting. You're directing the entirety of it to an emotion that many teenagers feel so its rather easy to understand and relate. The problem with taking ...

Ugh, I've already seen and reported a few of those. Felt like a schoolkid every time I did (oooo, I'm gonna tell on yooou), but now I shall do so ...

Alright, guys, so I realized something very interesting today. In all my years on YWS, I've only ever posted artwork that is rather on the cartoony side. And although I ...

Personally speaking, when I write, my characters talk. I suppose it wouldn't necessarily mean they are talking to me specifically, but their voices are as true to me as my ...

Pink Tassels He had pink tassels on his bike handles. I watched as he rode in circles, white rubber against heated cement. His smile was short-lived, though it never left ...

What an interesting voice! I think that's what really drew me into this piece of fiction. The narrators voice is a little more sardonic than the usual melancholy main character. ...

Howdy, Cad! Walker here with a review, as requested. And might I start off by saying this had a strangely interesting feel! I was a little bit confused on the ...

Coffee and or tea. Lots and lots and lots of it. That and I move to the family room downstairs. Its quiet, its dim, and the lighting is a more ...