Dreamwalker

Chapter 1.1 ~ I was six years old when Creature first appeared to me. It had been warm that day, if I remember correctly. A cheery kind of spring morning ...

Honestly, I can't believe how much it astounds me that someone so young could take on such a heavy subject with such grace. And without melodrama. I expected this would ...

You know, Lumi, this poem has officially made me contradict myself on a certain point. This may be my favorite and yet least favorite piece of poetry I've ever read ...

I'd love to have one as well seeing as, unfortunately, I have neither Visa's nor Credit Cards :/. If I did, I would gift in a heartbeat. But, of course, ...

I'll claim a spot! Either male or female :)

Ah, I'm actually rather excited about this piece! Now, first off, I'd like to note that you're already on your way to becoming a fantastic poet. You're creating metaphor where ...

I look forward to your poems. From start to finish, you grasp this extended metaphor and use it to create a sense of sadness or excitement, or really anything at ...

Alright, so the first thing I noticed about this piece was that it had rather childish undertones. That whole lack of trust. That whole 'this is extremely easy for most ...

Right from the start, my first instinct was to say that this would be a lovely piece of prose. Narrative poetry should tell a story but it should not simply ...

Generally speaking, emotional pieces are the easiest to write and usually the easiest to relate to, but when it comes down to it, they also need to have a great ...

Hello there, Devan! And, might I add, what an intense piece of fiction! It definitely left an impression on me so I give you a big thumbs up on that. ...

Hmm, I'm curious as to why your decided to put this in Lyrical Poetry. As interesting as it is, it definitely tells a story as opposed to something that is ...

Daisuki, I'm actually rather enthralled with this piece. In fact, I'm quite excited to say the least. It left an impression that most emotional pieces could not, plus the underlying ...

Hello Dani! First off, I would like to start off with how this imagery is rather... interesting. I love the ideology of it and the way it flows off the ...

*Have Jessie kind show he's offended. Tristan's like a moth to flame when it comes to righting wrongs he didn't mean to make xD. He'll be quick to try and ...