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Re: to kiss a dream goodnight
Due to the subject matter of the poem, I'm keeping my explanations short. Its kind of a love-poem, but not really. Rip it apart. Continuation; Russian Lullaby . to kiss ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Do you write every day?
I try. Hard. As if I write my novel on a daily basis? No. But I do write everyday, whether it be a short story or poetry, or even blogging ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Professor Morgenstern
cC, marry me. In other news, I liked this a lot more than I thought I was going to. A lot more than I probably would have bet myself over. ...
Sep 20, 2011 -
Re: Pokébook: Kanto
Name: Max Martin Age: 11 Gender: Boy Appearance (pic or description): He always carries Togepi with him. Shorter than his brother by a couple centimetres, Max is an identical version ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: My Perfect Girl
Pup has a point. There are ones willing to cultivate and there are ones willing to crush. If the name didn't symbolize where my stance is, you might take this ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps (1.0)
Rosey, Rosey, Rosey, you are my 300th review. That being said, this old instructor is cracking her knuckles and getting ready to crack this piece in half (if that's even ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Average Teenage Mentality?
First off, lets be serious. On a presentation note, this is absolutely horrendous. Every word starting with capitals. You being substituted with 'U'. Its all rather... tacky and internet slangy ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: honors Lit. essay
Alright so I'm going to give you a little advice on comparison essays, seeing as I'm a little late on getting to this review before you had to hand in ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Eyes
This has a gorgeous message! One in which we should all abide by, whether we're blessed with vision in both eyes, one eye, or no vision at all. After all, ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Last Journey Home
First off, I can definitely tell why you put this is Lyric Poetry. Its got very lovely repetition, which is nice, and I love the way in which you took ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Alone, but alive
I like this, probably more than I'll ever be able to express. That being said, I like the identity of this poem. The way that it gives the narrator or ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: with words she knows but does not understand
with words she knows but does not understand I see imminent reality in the turning of pages and the sweet suppleness of a forgotten voice whose lips spill psalms and ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Why I Want to Join the Peace Corps
You definitely have something to say, though this hardly feels like poetry. Maybe a spirited rant of some sort? In any case, think of the words you wrote. The image ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Pain
Hello, Theoutsidersfreak! I'm Walker, here to take a look at this piece ^_^. I suppose I should warn you first and foremost that this is not going to be the ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: About me..
Welcome to the site! We're a pretty friendly bunch so I'm sure you'll get along just fine with everyone. In any case, if you're looking for people who want to ...
Sep 12, 2011
