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Dreamwalker

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: to kiss a dream goodnight

    Due to the subject matter of the poem, I'm keeping my explanations short. Its kind of a love-poem, but not really. Rip it apart. Continuation; Russian Lullaby . to kiss ...

    Sep 20, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Do you write every day?

    I try. Hard. As if I write my novel on a daily basis? No. But I do write everyday, whether it be a short story or poetry, or even blogging ...

    Sep 20, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Professor Morgenstern

    cC, marry me. In other news, I liked this a lot more than I thought I was going to. A lot more than I probably would have bet myself over. ...

    Sep 20, 2011
  • Archive Re: Pokébook: Kanto

    Name: Max Martin Age: 11 Gender: Boy Appearance (pic or description): He always carries Togepi with him. Shorter than his brother by a couple centimetres, Max is an identical version ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Perfect Girl

    Pup has a point. There are ones willing to cultivate and there are ones willing to crush. If the name didn't symbolize where my stance is, you might take this ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Cat Steps (1.0)

    Rosey, Rosey, Rosey, you are my 300th review. That being said, this old instructor is cracking her knuckles and getting ready to crack this piece in half (if that's even ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Average Teenage Mentality?

    First off, lets be serious. On a presentation note, this is absolutely horrendous. Every word starting with capitals. You being substituted with 'U'. Its all rather... tacky and internet slangy ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • General Articles Re: honors Lit. essay

    Alright so I'm going to give you a little advice on comparison essays, seeing as I'm a little late on getting to this review before you had to hand in ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Eyes

    This has a gorgeous message! One in which we should all abide by, whether we're blessed with vision in both eyes, one eye, or no vision at all. After all, ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Last Journey Home

    First off, I can definitely tell why you put this is Lyric Poetry. Its got very lovely repetition, which is nice, and I love the way in which you took ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Alone, but alive

    I like this, probably more than I'll ever be able to express. That being said, I like the identity of this poem. The way that it gives the narrator or ...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: with words she knows but does not understand

    with words she knows but does not understand I see imminent reality in the turning of pages and the sweet suppleness of a forgotten voice whose lips spill psalms and ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Why I Want to Join the Peace Corps

    You definitely have something to say, though this hardly feels like poetry. Maybe a spirited rant of some sort? In any case, think of the words you wrote. The image ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Pain

    Hello, Theoutsidersfreak! I'm Walker, here to take a look at this piece ^_^. I suppose I should warn you first and foremost that this is not going to be the ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: About me..

    Welcome to the site! We're a pretty friendly bunch so I'm sure you'll get along just fine with everyone. In any case, if you're looking for people who want to ...

    Sep 12, 2011


i don't want to pass up an opportunity to be authentic for the opportunity to be profound
— soundofmind